Story re-written

I have written the story out again just as a text, this tries to tackle the issues raised at my last meeting and also many of the issues raised through studying the work of Helen Ward. Each time I have either hand written or typed out the story has altered slightly. This is something that is likely to continue through the project with small iterations happening as progress occurs. Both the hand written and typed formats are shown below and the story itself seems more complete in nature. Hopefully through time and further meetings any other issues will raise themselves to allow for solutions.